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The task
Write a story called "The Locked Door".
📝 How to plan it
Think about who locked the door and why. Perhaps it hides not a monster but a memory, like a grandparent's old room. Focus on curiosity fighting fear, and give the ending a gentle, surprising turn rather than a scare.
🏅 The model answer

At the top of Grandad's crooked staircase there was a door that never opened. Its handle was cold, its paint the colour of old milk, and a single brass keyhole stared out like a watchful eye.

"Leave it be," Grandad always said, and I always did, until the afternoon I found the key.

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It was hidden inside a teapot, wrapped in a handkerchief that smelled of dust and peppermint. My heart thudded as I climbed the stairs. The key turned with a reluctant click, and the door sighed open.

Inside was not a monster. Inside was a room frozen in time. A child's bed sat neatly made, a rocking horse waited in the corner, and dozens of paintings covered every wall, paintings of a small boy who looked exactly like Grandad. Sunlight fell in a warm bar across a shelf of toy soldiers, and over everything lay a soft grey blanket of dust, undisturbed for years.

"That was my brother," said a quiet voice behind me.

I spun round. Grandad stood in the doorway, but he was not angry. His eyes were soft and wet.

"Charlie," he murmured. "He was poorly for a long time. I kept his room just as he liked it. I could never bear to throw the key away, and I could never bear to use it."

We stood together in the golden dust. I slipped my hand into his.

"Will you show me?" I asked.

So he did. He told me about paper aeroplanes launched from this very window, about midnight biscuits smuggled up the stairs, about a laugh that had once filled the whole house. As the light faded, the locked room did not feel sad at all. It felt as though a door had opened inside Grandad too.

That evening we left the door ajar, just a crack, and let the fresh air in.

🎯 Why this scores top marks
  • Personification: keyhole "stared out like a watchful eye"
  • "Inside was not a monster" subverts the reader's fear
  • Dialogue reveals emotion without ever explaining it
  • Metaphor: a door has "opened inside Grandad too"
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